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He was the only guy I truely loved
He was the only guy I cared about
He was the first guy I cried myself to sleep for
He was the guy who showed me affection
He was the guy who made me so happy for the first time
He was the guy who Broke my Heart in half

What did I do to deserve this torment??
Did I say something wrong?
Did I NOT make him happy?

-Randi 11/15/02
This is for HIM. he knows who he is and probably so does everyone else. I just had to write this to help get my emotions out. I also wrote a letter today. it was addressed to go to HIM but i didnt plan on giving it to him. becuase it had so much anger. but writing that letter helped me. quite a bit.

... i miss him... and i still love him. :( (Sad)
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skeeter97 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I remember thinking that about my ex....
i hate the feeling...
hermafrodite Featured By Owner May 11, 2013
i think tom abandond me i hope not but hell what am i supposed to think after he hasint talked to me in two months
Rainbow-Licker Featured By Owner May 12, 2012
I'm right with you, my bf(now ex) broke up with me and said he thought he didnt treat me right, then I find out he left me for someone eles I cried so much now he wont talk to me anymore and he treats me like we were nothing :'c
LRhikari Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Student Writer
im with you in the pain, im going through the same thing... the worst part he's dating my best friend and she knows i still love him. this made me cry its nice to know when someone else is going through the same pain so you dont feel alone in the world.
Hoydadi Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this made me cry! that's wt is happening with me .. and I just can't help it .. God!
liljess111 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2010
wow i like this poem.. it reminds me of the past. bybut trust me the everything happens for REASON
Historygirl1863 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2008  Student Writer
i know how feel
Soul-Reader Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2008   Writer
I know exactly what you just want to be around them all the time :(
Jaythorne Featured By Owner May 8, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
That's truly and utterly beautiful... yet so heartbreaking and full of sorrow and pain at the same time... really, truly touching and true. :heart:
Singinchic7 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
I feel the same way!!! i cant say that my poems are dedicated to HIM because the guy mine are about actually has a profile!
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